Conscience Poem by SALINI NAIR

in every body there resides a soul that is eternal and part of supreme soul.when mistakes increases it strives to correct it..when it fails it reflect as ruin.conscience part is always argueing inside ..later death happens to be a part of supreme soul....

A well articulated train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated and beautifully penned in poetic diction to capture the conviction of poet. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

Very profound and insightful penned with wonderful concept......amazing write

Man is a compound of positive and negative forces, struggle of the two forces is always on. I believe positive force is a gift of God and the negative force is what we call it a Satan. Death separates the two forces. Parveen Shakir said: - Woh to khushboo hay hawaon mein bikhar jaye ga, Masala phool ka hay phool kidhar jaye ga. (He is fragrance and will scatter in the atmosphere, where the flower will go is a mystery.) Whether fragrance will come back again as a new flower or its fate will be Nirvana, or the decision will remain pending till the final day of judgment. Various beliefs give various replies. who knows as the dead man was never heard after his death. A nice philosophic poem.

Influence leads to mistakes always if these are wrong by others. Very nicely realized. But conscience when awakes realizes the truth. Wonderful poem.

In fact I think there is supreme philosophical thought is behind the ideas of the poem. The soul which always a witness to the actions of the human being but not directly eats the fruits of the actions gives timely counsels to restraint the wrong deeds but the other side of human thought continues his sins. The poem have wonderful thoughtful message for the correctness of worldly life with self awareness and intutive power. And also bound to listen the guidance of the soul.