Elena Sandu


Connection - Poem by Elena Sandu

-Who am I?
...A name?
...A piece of paper?
...The pigment of my skin?
.. Forms on my bones?
-Hmmm...
those may be only stamps...
Try again!
rewind: crfdjchdrchrfdsj
Who am I?
Celestial dust
the oceans nano part.
Tears. Smiles.
Peace. Joy. Sadness.
Try again!
Who am I?
Parents. Siblings.
School friends
neighbour friends
their parents their siblings
teachers coaches tutors
bosses colleagues
lovers, partners
wives husbands
children.
The children's friends
Their family
their family friends,
the friends of friends..
Image taste thought
motion...
-Stop!
Asking again:
WHO AM I?

- If not
lost thing,
than I'm
the memory
of many.


Comments about Connection by Elena Sandu

  • Gold Star - 23,202 Points Sandra Feldman (9/17/2014 6:33:00 AM)

    The most difficult thing in life.
    Finding Oneself!
    Excellent poem, has a great winding flow about it.
    Very original (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (9/15/2013 3:57:00 AM)

    I agree with Dr Subhendu Kar. Some nice introspective thoughts and imgery. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,456 Points Hans Vr (9/1/2013 12:10:00 AM)

    Hey, Elena, this is great work
    Superb reflection (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (8/26/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    .The pigment of my skin?
    .. Forms on my bones? ...................wonderful write by metaphors Who am I
    ' is when textured in matrix of different roles of relationship, i do admire the way you depict the text,10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (8/24/2013 1:15:00 AM)

    Connection is like an ode to acceptance. A deep emotion well expressed in this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,294 Points Ramesh Rai (8/22/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    you are my friend a member of my PH family.i hope you will not ask me again, who am i. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/19/2013 3:27:00 PM)

    if not lost thing than I'm the memory of many. good thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (8/19/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this poem. it is very well written and expressed.
    It reminds me of a poem I have written called Reflections take a
    look when you have time. We all have to take a good look at
    ourselves sometimes. We are somebody and we are beautifully
    and wonderfully made. A unique creation you are Elena. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (8/16/2013 4:36:00 AM)

    Like a mirror we are playing many roles just when we face our characters to different people..and in this big connection the invisible string tied us all together from heart to hearts with love and care signals..._Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/15/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    the question is so simple but find the answer is very hard
    brilliant writted (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 484 Points Patti Masterman (8/14/2013 5:24:00 PM)

    Your writing is so real. I hope you never change this one. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 809 Points Elena Plotkin (8/14/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Don't you dare the delete the word. It is genius and genius like this poem must be around long enough to be loved and appreciated in its totality. Don't change a thing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,149 Points Elena Sandu (8/14/2013 1:49:00 AM)

    Hahaha thank you for asking: that was a playful time, I was trying to find out how could I write the sound of rewind. I was not quite happy with the choice but as any game played alone, eventually will have its time of bore. I could delete that word, not convinced yet I will think about. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,769 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/14/2013 1:14:00 AM)

    You are a sweet memory of many. But,
    rewind: crfdjchdrchrfdsj
    What is that? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 14, 2013


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