Fatima Nusairat

Freshman - 952 Points (Jordan)

Confusion Vision - Poem by Fatima Nusairat

Confusion vision..
The way you write - for example-
bleeding the ink
On the water page,
And sometimes,
By the pen
The roof of the sky
Unite the universe
In your vision!
Because of that..
As the shadow in
The sky..
I come back to you!

Comments about Confusion Vision by Fatima Nusairat

  • Freshman - 952 Points Fatima Nusairat (5/9/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Oh.., may be the translation here is affecting the meaning of my poem :) , thanx for the comment Guess Who..! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 83 Points Guess Who (5/9/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    Very complicated..... got good expressions here but sorry couldn't understand your special art maybe i got an idea but it surpassed me..... i like your way keep the good work up...... Guess Who (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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