hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 45,281 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Confusion Never - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It was never confusion
But love with strong foundation
I stood for real relation
With self confession and elation

Hand in hand was just beginning
It was example in shining
It was day night dream
Blessed and agreed by him

I shall wipe your tears
To allay feelings and fears
That shall be last thing
I shall be expecting

I shall stand by
Never cheat or try
As it may amount to slap
On the love face and trap

We will learn to live
Respect each other and believe
As you may surrender
Sky above and earth under

Love is only way
And easy option in any way
We shall stand united
And breath as it is fully ignited


Comments about Confusion Never by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2013 7:37:00 PM)

    Mehta Sir,  there is never confusion- -Love is the only way for us all to stand united!  BRILLIANT RHYMING VERSES!

    Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai
    Jul 29,2013 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2013 7:37:00 PM)

    Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai
    Jul 29,2013
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    i admire your efficiency of writing poems. sweet flow
    rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai
    Jul 28,2013 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/28/2013 11:13:00 AM)

    Good poem..Love with strong foundation....Well read. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2013 9:58:00 AM)

    cool

    Adam GardnerLess than a minute ago
    simple, nice rhymes cool poem... unique (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    It was never confusion
    But love with strong foundation (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013


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