Confusion Poem by Gloraly Gomez

Confusion



</>The confusion that I feel
Is so great it's almost real
It's been making me want to scream
Though I know it's just a dream
I need someone to wake me up
Someone who sees through my make-up
I'm sorry but I'm saying no
But that's because I must let go
And though I see you in the distance
I must stay here with no resistance
And yes, I love you but all things end
So maybe we should just stay friends...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 26 March 2009

It's been making me want to scream Though I know it's just a dream these lines are my favorite...great idea well put in words

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Christine Kerr 26 March 2009

I like your vivid dream. Flows beautifully. I think if you were woken up you would want to hurry and get back to finish it.

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Gloraly Gomez

Gloraly Gomez

San Juan, Puerto Rico
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