Confused Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty

Confused

Rating: 5.0

It's not me
Sound and lines
Made a simple mistake
Resembling the idea of a hot fountain
With an uprooted and thwarted
Whom a sudden nothingness send a message
To clip himself away with a dry leaf

It's ultimately me
Nowhere the anchor landed
Floating the last embankment a ship
Heavy with unsent wishes it drowned
The deep and cold ocean blotted the beauty
A heart carried lifelong...

Pranab k c
06/10/2023

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 07 October 2023

Excellent poem. Liked it 5***

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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 December 2023

Thank you poet for your warm appreciation. Thank you very much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2023

An excellent poem.... well penned dear poet. Top score

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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 December 2023

Thank you poet for your wise interaction.

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 October 2023

Sometime the nothingness lands you in the ocean of hope. Well written

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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 December 2023

So warm your interaction, really much inspiring. Thank you poet, much.

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