Confused Poem by lacey schumacher

Confused

Rating: 4.8


Some days you are here.
Some times not, you are me and I am you.
When you are here im angry, when you are not im lonely.
There reasons for who I am.
That I can't explain.
If you Were me, You would know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaqualen Roberts 26 September 2012

thats amazing but i dont know why i am shedding tears while reading this

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 26 September 2012

A good mixture of some different feelings that is really fit the title. sign of love good work to read well done

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Anthony Mcduffie 03 May 2013

A short poem that tells and means so very much. Crafted with such skill. Can't wait to read more of yours. Thanks for writing all of these. (:

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Wahab Abdul 02 May 2013

the last line '' if i were you, i would know ''............very crafty the suspense is the main attraction of the poem..

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 01 November 2012

its for you hunny if short couldnt getting large meaning

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So Close 08 October 2012

really superb..the real feel comes out and lets hope to reach that confusion at end.. good work »so close«

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Chris Blazo 01 October 2012

Good play on words and the relationship of different feelings.

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