Confused? Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Confused?



Some kids in a playground
playing the round
of your dad is my dad...
suddenly found
that their dad
was her dad,
but..
she made no sound
because her dad
was his dad
who was playing a round
with more kids
that were his...

he was renowned
all over town.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sally Plumb
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 August 2012

so mysterious and amazing one.! the title should exactly be that.he he...Confused..! i think that question mark should be removed, because it really is confused! Really fine and Good

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Brilliant one Sally - I'm definitely confused but not surprised - it's the way of the world these days! !

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2012

amazin', really beautifulllll! ! ! !

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Constance K Yost 20 September 2012

Not so confused-we are all one big happy (?) family, right?

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Eindaray Kyaw 15 September 2012

Like your title..it is confused. I am hunger to know who he is! ! really interesting poem...keep it up fri

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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

this pervasive blight of the single parent...and fractured family unit...portrayed with some emotion and exasperation. ***

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Heather Wilson 18 August 2012

A thoughtful write, so many children have mum and dad living apart, some must be very confused.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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