Confused Poem by Ashleigh R. Gardner

Confused



confused and searching for the right things to say
i still don't know why you left me this way
i'm like a picture with out it's frame
the corners burned and crumpled, not looking the same

i feel so lost without you
i don't know what to do
it's because of you i won't be the same
and i still feel caught in this cage

running away from the tension and the cold air
looking on as if i wasn't really there
i can see you smile as you yell at me through your hair
breaking me and saying you never cared

i can't really destroy what never existed
you loving me was only pretended
and i can't miss what i never had
but loving you again wouldn't be so bad

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahrae Patterson 11 June 2011

My Grandma is a professional artist and my Grandfather is my Grandmothers framer...i just wrote a poem about my Grandfather being my Grandmothers frame... cool the connection of you referencing you being without a frame...your a painting...poetic...***this one shows that your not in love with the boy but the idea of being in love...

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I like your rhyme scheme. And those were really nice metaphors and similes. I really understand how you feel. The last two lines were my favorite.

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Iron Panda 23™ 05 March 2010

well written.....i really like it

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