Confession Poem by lady grace

Confession

Rating: 4.8


you come to me unnoticeably
stranger…you are to me
hidden smiles, whisper on your lips
no signs that you are watching me...

you touch my heart
with compassion
you wipe my tears
with comfort
you make me calm
in times of sorrow
you crash my fears
and dropp my burden...

you never leave
when I am weak
you give me strength
and make me sleep
you're always with me all the way
i love you... stay with me

in the darkest part of my life
when there are thorns on my trails
you give the sympathy I never know
honey just this moment I realized
how can I repay?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Js Black 16 September 2009

We should all be so lucky! Very well done, and keep up the great work...Jeff.

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Obinna Eruchie 16 September 2009

'...in the darkest part of my life, / when there are thorns on my trails/ you give the sympathy I never know/ honey just this moment I realized/ how can I pay to you? ' Touching lines.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 September 2009

love needs no pay, just more love in return... nice poem

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Aziz Alkaabi 16 September 2009

This is so tender a tribute, blended with carefully penned words that suit the theme.Music was also abundant.

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Herbert Nehrlich2 16 September 2009

A heartfelt poem with enough left brain thrown in. I would have a small suggestion, please see inbox H

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Tamara - Hanaring 18 September 2009

beautiful and warm confession, , sweetly said

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

Lady Grace, there is nothing wrong or feel bad about confessing your feelings in a simple (heartfelt) details, it is courageous, no a disgrace...It takes a lot to let all, these feelings freely flaw, coming out, not just from your maybe your barren lips, but from the bottom of your heart! , you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Ben Gieske 17 September 2009

Enjoyable to read your open and heartfelt thoughts and feelings. I like the way you balance and format the poem.

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Lynda Robson 17 September 2009

Heartfelt confession of love, it needs no repayment, good write 10 Lynda xx

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 September 2009

As usual written with so much emotion Lady Grace... You should never feel bad about expressing your emotions to some one., . Better to express them rather than keep them in your head, ... lovely write..10 with love shan

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