Confession Poem by Niken Kusuma Wardani
Confession
I try to say this as clear as the sky
Plain as a tea break at noon
It’s not outrageous thing anyway
Just a simple note of truth
Which I fail to repress through
I might scared you to death
With the bold fact of this act
Should you shrink or flee
It’s yr freedom to be
Sure you should forgive me
I fail to pretend it is time
To tell you that we are remain
Whether I am me
And you still you
As selfish as we wanna be
I start to mind you
Your words work like a spell
Your picture is breathing
You lure & breed hope
Your entity possessed me
I trace gracefully each of our steps
Linger at the shadow no more
The shining path ahead of us
Is an arousing fate of two signs
The beginning or the end
I hate to bargain with probability
Can not just let go and sigh
As a kiss good night on the door step
Though it sound silly, it’s not a fad
“Man, I’m in love with you”
What an eloquent poem you have shared, a true confession of feelings, of being inlove. Written so softly with simple lines and thoughts...Thanks for the wonderful read i had.
I love the tes break at noon line its nice and so true. I like you're ending also this was a wonderful piece KRISTA
my wife is showering and i must be off before she gets out or who knows what trouble i will be in? . i'll have to get back here to read this at least one more time. some of it i have trouble with as, i suppose, english is not your first language. thanks for your time in commenting on my poem cloistered oyster. bri edwards
I hate to bargain with probability Can not just let go and sigh As a kiss good night on the door step Though it sound silly, it’s not a fad “Man, I’m in love with you”.not a bargain at all and not probability too.. it is pure admission and not confesssion too. lovely kusuma... i liked it....10 read mine..lovely life...anywhere.. Mary to marry
Excellent poem. Bold, sentimental purity, classical.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 7:14:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A very bold and black and white confession of love. A good poem.