Condemned Poem by harsh sagi

Condemned

Rating: 2.6


The world around, has closed on me,
Confining me, within life and death.
The days of my freedom, have passed away,
leaving me naught but;
the bare walls of my cell,
which today is my new home,
tomorrow - My Grave.

The years have passed by,
with no love or care,
naught but only
hate and pain.

And now, I lie on my deathbed,
recalling my days of freedom,
with a loving family,
and caring friends.

And how I repent, the day
I left, their love and care,
on a journey of lust and greed,
to a place unknown,
A place filled with hate and pain;
A place of betrayal and vendettas;

How I wish today,
I never had gone,
on that voyage

For the care I needed - was never there;
The love I sought - was elsewhere.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Bennington 07 August 2007

How eloquently put! Don't we all have journeys we wish we had never taken? I think these are our most valuable lessons-ones which we would never choose. Mary-

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Princess Me 23 July 2007

So far my favorite. Use od words and rhyme is awesome. Another sad one with lots to say. great job!

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