Concealed Darkness Poem by Wendy Bureau

Concealed Darkness

Rating: 3.5


Consumed by midnight's darkness
A black candle flickers, the only light
Body, dimly accentuated
For a night of sinful delight

Black lace bra and panties
Blood red satin sheets
A powerful grip takes hold
Heart racing, pounding beats

With empowering sexual touch
Biting, piercing my skin
Lips curled in bloody smile
Innocence lost to an immortal sin

Slowly working down my body
Licking, drinking from me, my love
Sliding itself into me
Lust's desire, a fitted glove

A release with controlled aggression
Shadows, swallowing my face
Animalistic impulse, dissolves
Disappearing, without trace

An invisible entity unleashed
Furiously feeding, on victim fear
Vanishes almost without trace
Only sign, a fallen tear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabrina Helphrey 16 July 2008

very intense poem alot of emotion can be seen great poem keep up the good work-Sabrina P.S. thanks for your comment on my poem

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Godfrey Morris 14 May 2012

So sensual, intersting and pleasing to the ear. Lovely poem

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Bob Gibson 15 May 2009

The act! the performance of two human beings, is extolled in implicit detail, romance is woven between the interfaces of two people who's boundaries are within each other, pure! unadulertated love!

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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

Again you leave me breathless! i cannot conceal the passion within! a great write Wendy! truly Bob x

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Bob Blackwell 10 August 2008

This poems painting with words, you draw a very vivid picture- a black candle flickers at midnight, a wonderful description of how we can lose ourselves consumed with passion. Phew this is some write well done.

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Bob Gibson 17 July 2008

Phew! its hot in here! Pullleeeeeeze open that door! what can i say! fantastic poem Wendy!

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