Complacent Poem by Robert Smith

Complacent

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silent stoic
strong as can be
why would he need
a friend like me?

hard cold
facing attacks
sightless he feels the first
blow of the ax

rescue now
how i don't know
the ax would destroy me
with only one blow

courage alive
but what's that to me?
i'll use any excuse
but i won't save the tree

Thursday, September 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,woods,nature,environment,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 11 January 2016

That what's wrong with the world today it has become complacent with things being the way they are.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2015

Interesting concept, makes me wonder why you wouldn't save the tree. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Robert Smith 18 September 2015

Thank you for writing RoseAnn! I guess most people wouldn't raise a finger to save a tree from being cut down, with notable exceptions of course. The speaker in this case realizes the tree is alive, could use a friend, and must come up with an excuse to justify his cowardice. :)

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