* Competition Kills [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* Competition Kills [senryu]

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competition kills
all..the inherent beauty
in every thing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 28 May 2009

well this a competitive world and we can't rise without a competition. i was just portraying the difference in jealousy and competition..

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Sandra Martyres 28 May 2009

In today's world we cannot survive without competition - of the positive kind ofcourse...

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Smiley Hooker 28 May 2009

i agree with Sandra and Priyanka. just a healthy competition and it's all right.: -)

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

i agree with u....in every form competition(healthy or unhealthy) kills

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2009

Sort of nature - the strong survive

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 June 2009

Compete with passion and leave the rest...winning and losing is not main. Nice write.

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

To compete with skill sportively without jealousy is healthy...otherwise it would be a chaos...nice poem

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Ency Bearis 29 May 2009

meaningful write.......

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

competition gives life, to everything thats right.

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Naidz Ladia 28 May 2009

anywhere, there is competion...in work, school, business etc..and etc..this is a part of civilization..naizz

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