Compatible Feelings Poem by Khairul Ahsan
Compatible Feelings
When I hear a cuckoo coo,
With that I can hear you too.
When you see a bird in flight,
Do I too, fly into your sight?
When magpies chatter,
I hear your laughter.
When drops of rain patters on your window,
Do you gaze, to find my shadow?
When a gentle breeze, sways the trees,
I hear you hum, like the buzzing bees.
When the approaching squalls, dash on your walls
Atop the noise, do you hear my calls?
When the bells jingle and the brooks babble.
All I can hear is your random gabble.
When at midnight, a lover mute, plays on a flute,
To your eyes, does my semblance take a route?
Dhaka
20 September 2013
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Khairul this isso entertaining! beautiful meaning found! _Soul
Invigorating with tinge of joyful colour lovely write 10+++
Thank you for your gracious comments. This poem of yours is a smile maker- maybe even a giggle maker- oops there's some of that random gabble. Love it!
Thank you too, @Connie Yost, for your inspiring comment. Much obliged.
@ Naida Nepascua Supnet, Thanks a lot for your overflowing compliments. I am truly inspired.
@ Elena Plotkin, Thanks for your lovely comments on my poem and the generous 10++. I particularly liked the expression 'It is achingly beautiful.'
wow, this is cute, eerrr, romantic, very nicely written. Bravo for this #overflowingromance.
I love this poem and I have added it to my poem list! It is achingly beautiful. Bravo! Great write! 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wow a very lovely, sweet and very descriptive poem, that shows how love takes over everything and how everything reminds you of the one you love. Wonderful piece!