Common Sense Poem by Eyan Desir

What a truthful poem. Walking in forgiveness is the key to healthy relationships. Well Done! ; D

friends wthout forgiveness are like birds wthout feathers..aa..ya, that's true..nicely done

Friendship without forgiveness Are birds without feathers We need wings to fly! The ultimate utterance a human being to pronounce. Beautiful imagery. still can't imagine birds without feather. And.....And......we need wings to fly. Perhaps poets and averages are different in nature. Poets have the wings....their romantic thoughts but average! They will perhaps have to purchase it from somewhere I think, otherwise poet will have to borrow him...... Good writing. Enjoyed. Write more...... Regards, 10 Apoet Bangla

A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.