Common Link Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Common Link

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There is common bond
When you live in same pond
Different kind of fishes may be the companion
Still it is worthwhile union

You may have single entity
With same purpose and utility
You are confined to certain areas
With same appeal and pleas

Faith has some restriction
As you follow majority of fractions
It is called community
That serves more humanity

Language forms no barrier
It serves as carrier
Relation is created life long
Everything is addressed before going wrong

There is linkage
As you advance with age
History never repeats again
Those who adjust with time never face the pain

Common thread keeps us together
They are addressed as sisters and brothers
There is lot more to venture
To think of nice life and future

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

There is common bond When you live in same pond

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

For personal reasons... Jordan Dumer47 minutes ago I can't relate to the following stanza, Faith has some restriction As you follow majority of fractions It is called community That serves more humanity It comes off as too conformist. What about diversity as serving the community in this mult-cultural world we live in now days? Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago people prefer to live with community.. general reference 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

very nice Susan Wall50 minutes ago good work like it Comment 0

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hasmukh junior 10 November 2020

well done hasmukh! ! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

Susan Wall44 minutes ago i think the poeple i used to work for was very shallow because i gaave my heart to them and yet i was treated like i was a nothing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

Well expressed Levi Oguike50 minutes ago Nice Comment 0 good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

Guilty Pleasure50 minutes ago spiritual musings.. Comment 0 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

ash wolf 50 minutes ago i liked your lines

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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