Commitment Poem by Kevin Patrick

Commitment

Rating: 5.0


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Never is there love,
Unless there is an inner faith
For faith admits our pain
Lessons learned will be our gain


A Reasoned hearts a paradox
Until it reaches anothers equinox
Two equal spheres will influence
A ravishing melody of subsistence

If we feel anguish through our walls
Perhaps it will solidate the long hauls
From this wisdom, that is grace
we know that hope must be embraced

Fore never can the day
Exist without the night
We must hold before the storm,
or become shipwrecked on the mourn

Sails flung by passions fury
will be tarnished by the currents
But our commitment down the isle,
will reward the true golden years

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 November 2011

Wow! Kevin! What a powerful, deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I love the richness of imagery and fine texture of this impressive write! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep on writing my man! You got what it takes in the Poetry World: TALENT! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Besa Dede 02 March 2012

Kevin, this is a very meaningful poem, with a powerful message! ! it is so true that we learn through pain and through acknowledgement of it! I am truly moved! Thank you for sharing! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

A poem of great depth. Powerful write imbued with wisdom and insight. ''Our commitment will reward the true golden years." A beautiful line from a great poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 December 2016

Kevin, continue your commitment to writing poetry. You are doing great!

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Walterrean Salley 12 May 2012

Marriage, business, etc. - commitment is what holds it together. Even hope is spawned from true commitment. And anything without commitment, falls apart. Thank you, Kevin, for this beautiful and interesting piece.

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Eric Cockrell 06 March 2012

love, a journey taken by two, along a path that winds up and down, and is beset by many storms... that exposes the true self in its very risk. good poem!

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 06 March 2012

This is a gud poem...it really touch the core of true love....which is eternally the same...and faithful....i luv the theme...anf the writeup.....keep it up...+

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