* Commitment Poem by Eyan Desir

Thanks for reading its been a while I will be back posting some poems...

glad to see u back new man...the poem is smoothly penned, , , with soft and tender feelings inside...no harassment, no stresses of cruelty...no touch of sadness instead a touch of comfort...this is nicely done ian...am glad ur here again....smileeeeeeeeeeeee

Flown with a nice and peaceful feel. These lines are good...'Darkness kisses our land...The sun opens her eyes...Chapters begin to unfold...And still the softest words...From my heart can not...capture how much I love her'-Good.

We wish that 'beautiful bond' would live for good, and other lovely stories could be brought herein. Thanks for sharing your poem.

Glad to read your works again... this is a great write..touching and very wholesome... great theme 10+++ Maia

‘…From my heart can not/Express how much I love her …’ Love is a subsubtle feeling … though poets’ try to express but still vocabulary is just on the ‘tip of iceberg’…and aptly you’ve confessed…. How much incapable we’re…it’s the aesthetic pitch of this poem… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

'Darkness kisses our land The sun opens her eyes Chapters begin to unfold' i love the use of imagery used here... a sense of dramatic irony (probably unintentional) comes through.. darkness and sun.. i absolutely loved it. well done!

well said.. creative.........

i like this alot :)

committed to honest love...good poem...very much frank in its voice...10