Commercials Make Me Cry Poem by Noemi Lee

Commercials Make Me Cry

Rating: 4.8


Commercials make me cry,
So do articles about talented men
Who, at age 44
of a massive heart attack
Die.

I'm sure I'm coming down with the flu
and you forgot the 8.2 hour anniversary
of the moment we met.
How could you?

A burned slice of pizza,
and a sad song bring a tear,
My favorite TV show is now off the air.

To you,
these things may be minimal,
but I cant help it.
I think
they are
Criminal.

As you can see,
this poem is a mess.
I really can't help it reader.
Just 3 letters for you
P M S.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelia Williams 08 September 2006

I thought I was the only one. You have great style. Keep it up!

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Valsa Terron 08 May 2006

:) ..Loved it! I can relate. I really like your style...keep writing! Love, Valsa

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