Coming For Happiness Poem by Khaleelulla syed.A
Coming For Happiness
It rises, rises from the sea.
Rejoicing, dancing, singing,
Finding for a mate,
To enjoy with.
Making the tall trees cover,
Cover their faces.
With huge dense leafy hands,
Of shame, maybe shy.
Bending their tall heads,
Laugh the children.
Clasping their hands,
Inhaling it. Ah! happiest moment.
Travelling through,
It enters the town.
Stretching its wings everywhere.
Bringing the paradise down.
Touching the sensiest part,
It tickle's.
Giving goose bumps,
From elder to younger.
Melting their hearts,
Heaving their eyelids,
Forcing eyebrows to shut.
Just to feel, nothing else.
Nothing it feels,
Nothing it knows,
But only one.
To make, make us happy.
Everyone feels, requests,
Requests it to stay.
But it doesn't,
It's unstoppable.
It travels, travels
From here to there.
Knocking every door,
Bringing joy.
Look at it,
How it acts,
Acts for nothing,
Just for happiness.
But we..........
ur poem is no doubt very nice & beautifully composed....... but dont mind to much lenght of the poem make create difficulty for readers
ur poem is no doubt is very nice & beautiful................ but dont mind i think too much length of the poem create difficulty for readers.... may b am right or its my wrong estimation but at all dont mind plzzzz
it was good you seam deep enough to write poems so keep going but the more life gives you the more reason you will have to write
I liked the ending! ! ! You have done a good job with it. questioning ourselves with a subtle way. Nice work! ! ! !
It is quite good. Yet, the feel in it is missing. THe tenor of the poem is lacking. The feel of the joy is not offered. All in all, it is quite good
The poem is quite good. Yet, the feel in it is lacking. The tenor is missing. The comparisons are apt though. It is quite good, all in all
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:58:17 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Bending their tall heads, Happiness the precious thing we should hold dear.Thanks for sharing.