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Ali Sabry

Rookie - 77 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Come With Me My Lovely Princess


Come with me my love and let’s go to the high
Lets live our beautiful night each other only far off the crowds places
Let’s forget all our pains that hurt us because we must to be a happy in all the time
Let’s dance on the romantics song and forget the whole world
Darling be with me in all the time & stay around me cause I can't live without you any more and I have to see you beside me in all the time every day cause I feel in comfort just when you are near me
Darling you know that you are the first lady who entered in my life suddenly and I loved you from the first time I saw you and I couldn't tolerance your beauty cause your beauty is very awesome and there is no lady have your beauty in whole the world you are the best and you will still the best in all your life
My love at my end of my poem I say to you that you are the best lady in whole the world. I chosen you from all these ladies cause there is no better to choose and I found my happiness with you, You are my lovely princess and I will never let you part in all my life you will always stay in my heart in all my life forever.

Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

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  • Freshman - 1,681 Points Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (10/17/2012 2:52:00 PM)

    I should call you a romantic poet, Ali. You are very persistent to offer and express your love for your beloved. Delightful read! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Besa Dede (6/22/2012 6:50:00 PM)

    Good prosaic poem. Just pay a little bit of attention to grammar and spelling.
    Keep up the good work.
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Godfrey Morris (6/22/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    I don't really like long phrases in poetry, but somehow you make it work. Lovely poem you have (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 90 Points Wang Qian (6/21/2012 9:21:00 PM)

    Very powerful love poem! !
    I can feel about your strong burning love towards your lovely princess~~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darkangel Flyfree (6/21/2012 12:54:00 PM)

    Awe this is just so beautiful. You are a great writer when it comes to love. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 651 Points Tiku . (6/11/2012 10:07:00 AM)

    expression of love is so strong here.seems you have a beautiful heart Ali.Liked your write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kaitlin Schmidt (12/28/2011 11:32:00 AM)

    You have very deep thoughts, but they don't come across as very deep. I think if you try to think outside the box a little, then your poetry will come alive more. Obviously you are very passionate about this woman, help your reader feel like you are as well. Great job! Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Thando Mashinini (12/27/2011 1:10:00 PM)

    Sabry you are good, but I'm going to be honest: fix your sentence sequence and
    Try to think abroad. Put a picture of what you feel. In vision there is power, but
    Either way your poem is understandable.*WINK* (Report) Reply

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