Come Out Of Syndrome Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Come Out Of Syndrome

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It is living hell
Which may spell?
Doom for entire life
And remind about strife

Do one wrong thing
And suffer entire life for something
It shall not allow you
Peaceful life through out

It may pinch and trouble you
Day and night to pass through
With pain and agony causing unrest
Real tragedy in life and crucial test

Why it strikes your idle mind?
Nobody ahs tried find
Its origin and impact
People blame ill will and act

It has same end
As appears from trend
Happiness may be only when
You are honestly driven

Guilty conscious remains forever
It allows no peace either
Whole life you may suffer guilt
As it is firmly built inside

So come out of syndrome
Try to forget and welcome
Some new change with good work
Try to help out and look forward

Tuesday, April 15, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

It is living hell Which may spell?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Maricela Ramírez and Shujat Ahmad like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

Like 19 minutes ago by Benny Ramirez | Reply Benny Ramirez I love the emotion this poem provokes. Well done. 18 minutes ago by Benny Ramirez | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

PROFESSIONAL Daniel Anthony6 minutes ago Sounds highly poetic. Well written Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

A very descriptive poem with good imagery Jorge Sandoval5 minutes ago Good content and lots of imagery

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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