Come On! We Can Do It! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Come On! We Can Do It!

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The hearts that dwell in the pitch dark,
Glow like the sun when filled with love and care,
The opaque body and the inefficient lights,
Keep the hearts in the dark, behind the wall and the hedge.

Vicious heart that is foxy in nature,
Kind heart that is smooth as petals,
The venturous heart that is vulture in action,
The fickle heart is like an ape in motion.

Too little heart vested with too many functions,
Fist sized hearts are troubled with delusion,
Monotonous life not appealing to human,
Rhythm of hearts changes with damages done.

Can have the notorious things to shake the head,
The racing heart yearn for pleasurable shrouds,
In the bright day light and at the pitch of the dark night,
Let us celebrate to change the rhythm of the hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Adrenaline rush of poetry.Good flick.18324

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Valsa George 28 September 2012

Hearts filled with love glow like the sun and dispel the darkness of hatred around! A great poem, Subbu!

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Scotty Dogg 27 September 2012

Great poem. I loved it.

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Dave Walker 27 September 2012

A happy heart is what we all want and need, a fantastic poem.

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