Come On Now Poem by sagar patil.

Come On Now

Rating: 3.5


hearts..become clouds
eyes..start flowing....
signs.....emerge like hurriecane
.....come on.....
..........trouble me.... make me cry.
.....come on now...

take away all ur sorrows
any that u given me
.......or then...tell me....
how i should deal with them
now 4m this journey....
i will have 2 depart
this path where my loved beloved is
r the paths will take....

come on now
come on now....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i fall in depression that time i write this poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 10 May 2013

Another lovely poem spoiled by the use of text speak I do like it by the way just the U and Ur's irk me. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Persian Khushi 25 September 2012

am sorry you had to go through that alone... a beautiful heartfelt poem came frm yr depressed state.

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Poetheart Morgan 29 August 2012

UAU! ! ! Really, you understand love! ! ! ! Great and beautiful write! ! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 22 August 2012

I know how you feel and this poem is beautiful and filled with longing of the Beloved's hands upon your heart and know that in those times He is with us the most a moment where we realize something and become stronger form it, if we allow it to be so, just the knowing that the Divine hand is upon us. Beautiful and I am so happy to see poems from you! :) love and light

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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