Come-Live With Me Poem by anju addanki

Come-Live With Me

Rating: 4.9


Pain... is that what i feel when you are away?
-the prick, the ache and the thorn in my heart?
Come-Soothe me.

Lonliness...is that what surrounds me?
-the void, the gloom and the darkness?
Come-Fill me.

Scared-is that what i feel without you?
-dark shadows, hidden enemies and clouded sky?
Come-Comfort me.

Don't leave me like this, no never....
The thought of it makes me quiver,
Do hear my pleas, darling, to come and live with me.

Pleasure! is what I feel with you by me,
light headedness, my singing heart and the starry nights.
Come-Fly with me.


Satisfied! is how I feel in your arms secure.
Safe from the hidden shadows,
Come- Hold me.

Confident! I am with you near me-
and cross the seven oceans i shall but,
Darling do hear;
Come-Live with me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karla Bardanza 23 June 2009

Lovely poem, full of good vibe!

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anurag duggal 25 June 2009

learn to control you emotions or i am afraid they will get the better of you best wishes your well wisher ravana was a grat scholar remebereda zillion good words but all mayavis are destroyed...thats destiny... thats destiny..... best of luck

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Surya . 25 June 2009

opening your heart to your man. very nice voted 10 surya

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 June 2010

Joy in enjoying pleasure in pain…a very nice concept…and equally well penned.. Enjoyed Ma’am 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kee Thampi 06 January 2010

we feel a freedom in words to fly Pleasure! is what I feel with you by me, light headedness, my singing heart and the starry nights. Come-Fly with me.

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Siddartha Montik 30 October 2009

liked it very much.., nice way to express the love for a Dear! 10++

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Siddharth Singh 26 October 2009

The man will have no choice but to come to you and live with you, once he reads the poem. Wonderfully crafted.

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Emma Adamyan 20 October 2009

sorry didnt find the poem u`ve asked abt, but this one i liked so much. so cosy

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