Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 12,196 Points (Bangladesh)

Come Home Darling - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

It's been long since you've gone.
Though we chat, regularly somewhat,
See you on Skype, every night,
Yet that's not enough, seems tough,
To live without you. It's nothing new!

The night before you left, we hardly slept,
Heightened emotions, kept us in motion.
Intense desires kept us afire, oh my dear,
What a climax of ecstacy was there!
The fury of love roared everywhere.

Now my body aches with pent up desire,
Like a volcano ready to erupt anywhere.
Loads of unspent love and desire
Await your arrival to feel and share.
Please come with the preparation you require!

Come home, darling, I can no longer bear,
The memory of that night, our bodies bare,
Fulfilled, inch by inch, with nothing to spare.
The thought kindles the physical desire,
Aches and spasms are caused by the flare.

05 July 2013

Comments about Come Home Darling by Khairul Ahsan

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/31/2015 1:41:00 PM)

    @Melvina Germain,
    Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. I am glad that you do see similarities between our poems as mentioned. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,005 Points Melvina Germain (10/30/2015 8:04:00 PM)

    Longing, love, sensual bliss...this poem is packed full of emotion and pure love woven through every line. I like this very much and do see similarities to my poem you mentioned as well...Thank you for sharing..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/28/2015 2:19:00 PM)

    @Megan Russell,
    My answer to your question is 'both'. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Megan Russell (4/26/2015 10:18:00 PM)

    I liked this poem a lot! Do you write from experience? Or imagination? The final paragraph brings it all together nicely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    @Ruma Chaudhuri
    I am also touched by your generous comment on my poem.
    Thanks for understanding, thanks for appreciating.
    Much inspired, much obliged,
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    @Evelina Kononenko ~
    Thanks for appreciating the emotion in the poem. I am much inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Ruma Chaudhuri (5/20/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Its very much emotional poem. Touchy as well as nice poem. I really like the poem. It can touch anybody's heart easily. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points ~ Evelina Kononenko ~ (5/12/2014 11:43:00 AM)

    wow this has so much emotion! I really love this one :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/8/2014 1:15:00 PM)

    @ Chris G. Vaillancourt
    I am glad to have your comment. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,518 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Very touching. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    @Amitava Sur
    Thanks for understanding and appreciating the 'Intense longing of love' in the poem. I am glad and inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,005 Points Amitava Sur (2/14/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    Intense longing of love and lust was expressed here with vivid details.... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/23/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    Thank you very much for your nice words.
    Such nice words of appreciation fills my heart with joy. Thanks for giving me the much needed joy! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/14/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    @ Naida Nepascua Supnet,
    Thanks for agreeing to the emotions expressed in the poem. Physical presence cannot be replaced by the virtual ones. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,776 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/21/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    You talk of many couples afar but still making it through. Constant talking is not enough, never be enough. It will not suffice the presence needed.
    Ah, as always, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/12/2013 11:31:00 PM)

    @ Aqua Flower,
    I am so glad you liked it! Thanks for the kind words. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    Yes, it is passionate. The poem was written with the feelings of separation when my love was on a tour of duty, away from home, for not too long (yet it was unbearable) .
    Thanks for sharing your sad feelings with me. It makes me feel I was able to communicate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:24:00 PM)

    @Sandra Feldman,
    Yes, the fire of desire, to be with your love and to make love is overwhelming, all engulfing.
    I cannot thank you enough for your second line. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanthia Moore (8/9/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    Soooo im sitting here in tears this made me sad. This is what happens when i read something emotional. This really got to me but i will be ok. But it is a fantastic poem. Love it. Its so passionate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,262 Points Sandra Feldman (7/29/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    Might we say, the fire of desire, very passionate, indeed. You are an amazing poet. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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