Comb Of Friendship Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Comb Of Friendship

Rating: 5.0


Can you leave me alone?
In a time of need,
Never,
You can't my friend.
Can you give me an everlasting pain?
How can you?
I believe in your love,
I trust you dear,
You are my friend!

You may shout at me,
Even you can slap,
I am smiling,
I shall make you smile,
In this sorrowful night,
I can't leave you alone.

How can I,
Leave you alone,
When you need me,
I have shared your good days,
I shall share this drear cold night,
The sun will arise once again my friend,
Through the glass windows,
Of your lovely house,
Sunlight will come in,
Having enjoyed a sleep,
Peaceful and deep,
You will arise smiling.

Your cell phone will play,
A lovely tune,
A call you have been waiting,
An offer of a job!

I have talked,
To your beloved,
The clouds,
That shaded your relations,
Have been removed,
She is expected in the morning,
She'll be back to you,
With all her charms,
And the lovely arms,
I know she is shy,
Your lovely spouse,
Before she comes back,
I shall leave you alone.

I would love to see the porn,
Of your warm welcome!
But I am your friend!
How can I?

One more thing,
The sleeping pills you brought,
I have thrown in commode,
The comb of my fingers,
Is enough for you,
I shall let you sleep.

Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A friend's fingers is a comb that brings peace of mind and a deep carefree sleep.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 10 December 2014

A heart touching write on friendship.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 December 2014

Very well composed poem on friendship with soothing and loving words..........amazing write.....10/10

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Amitava Sur 13 December 2014

After many days I could avail the site, feeling happy to be able to read and comment. An excellent poem on friendship with it's closeness and endearing feeling, real essence of friendship .... Thank you Akhtar Vai.Long live friendship........ 10.

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Sarmad Mirza 13 December 2014

an excellent poem composed on friendship some lovely words amazing script

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Salini Nair 12 December 2014

true friendship is rare nowadays....but witnessed it in these lines....nice

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V P Mahur 11 December 2014

Dear Bro, A very lovely poem with deep emotions. Thanks for your comments on my new poems. Unluckily I have come online after along gap. I always missed your lovely company.

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Valsa George 11 December 2014

A friend's presence and words of sweet assurance can remove all clouds of gloom from one's life! Sometimes we long for a friend more than our own dear ones! It is before a friend that we can lay bare our heart without reservations! A great poem on friendship!

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