some are bright and white
some we desist are pure black
we fall prey to grey
Good observation, sam! It is because grey is the middle path between white and black; just think about it.
Nice playing up with colors in a very meaningful way. Your poetry is more than black, white and grey - it's brightly colored, Sam, warm and beautiful! :)
Nice playing up with colors in a very meaningful way. Your poetry is more than black, white and grey - it's brightly colored, Sam, warm and beautiful! :)
some are bright and white some we desist are pure black we fall prey to grey...naturally drawn towrds attracting one andfall prey....lovely one....19 read mine.........colours
ouch! ! ! ! we fall to prey and grey...it killsss..Thanks for sharing this wonderful senryu! ! ! 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice piece on the choice between Black and White ending up with grey! !