# Colors - Senryu Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Colors - Senryu

Rating: 3.3


some are bright and white
some we desist are pure black
we fall prey to grey

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 29 July 2009

Nice piece on the choice between Black and White ending up with grey! !

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Rakesh Bedi 29 July 2009

Good observation, sam! It is because grey is the middle path between white and black; just think about it.

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Carol Gall 30 July 2009

really good samanyan 10

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Smiley Hooker 30 July 2009

Nice playing up with colors in a very meaningful way. Your poetry is more than black, white and grey - it's brightly colored, Sam, warm and beautiful! :)

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Smiley Hooker 30 July 2009

Nice playing up with colors in a very meaningful way. Your poetry is more than black, white and grey - it's brightly colored, Sam, warm and beautiful! :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

some are bright and white some we desist are pure black we fall prey to grey...naturally drawn towrds attracting one andfall prey....lovely one....19 read mine.........colours

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Ency Bearis 10 August 2009

good combination...and the after effect at the end...

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Catrina Heart 02 August 2009

ouch! ! ! ! we fall to prey and grey...it killsss..Thanks for sharing this wonderful senryu! ! ! 10

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Louis Rams 01 August 2009

nicely written. it is short and to the point.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 August 2009

All colors mixed together turn into white in color.

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