##### Colloquy Or Quarrel. Left Vs Right Poem by sarwar chowdhury

##### Colloquy Or Quarrel. Left Vs Right

Rating: 4.1


No notice, events occur….ESP in sleep….two life has come… outlander....not human shape….but lively silhouette…..two hands…..left and right…they talk to knock each other….

Right: hi, You say something excellent idiotic!

Left: Humm, great wise-fool you are!

Right: Let oxymoron! Come on!
You just ‘movement’ me the ‘order’!

Left: though cortically different
Me play the role great!
See ‘95% of right-handed left-hemisphere
dominance for language’ in your head!

Right: Commotion your, to me tweet tweet
Induce much confusion bittersweet!

Left: Not true, you phallocentric, we seek
scientific method. Reasoning.

Right: In the name of science don’t lie!
Science not static, continuum, move forward with smile
Hypothesis-theory-philosophy can be tested and falsified!
Know history then talk! Don’t insult science!

Left: Mr. wise-fool, history worthless! People learn not
from history! Events circling why?

Right: yeap, events occur since you born by turn!
History – records – chronicles –acounts has a value!
War and peace both in dream.
Your actions against conscience!

Left: You oppressor-tormentor-killer
We save. Free. Seek absolute freedom. We healer!

Right: WoW! So sweet lie! Fallacious facts are
Weapon your! Absolute freedom huh! Then, say-
Man born naked, so must stay undress whole lifetime! Isn’t?
Let them do anything anywhere anytime!
Let vulgar-rude-crude-boorish be flooded!

Left: You all over stop creativity!
Let human brain grow more! Be sky! Don’t shy. Kiss your bride!
Anti-family we are….unbound we in the limitless space!

Right: oops! again erroneous tittle-tattle pomp pomp!
By born you’re not free. Your heart entrapped in microcosm!
You wish to fly but you can not!
All thing free mean destroy creativity!

Left: Let life just live…’just do it’..no second think.
Modernism now a deaf and dumb bagger!
We are in postmodern! Don’t move backward!
Free from taboo…enjoy….use all toe..huge wave.
Lips. Effloresced rose. Aesthetic pose. To move into….

Right: Strange! You’re lacking intellectual acuity!
So much foulness from you! See, deconstruction smile!
Postmodernism captured by binary opposition!
Dark and bright! No way to stop fight!

Left: No no no no…you’re looter shooter… you you…

Right: Cool cool! Don’t shout! Time as sunray moonlit…as air breeze..
Comes for all…doesn’t bother politics.
we are on the bright side….you ah! ...running towards
Pre-modern era… you scandalize civilization!

Left: No! you are on the side of nonsense capitalism!

Right: No! Don’t make cocktail! For some reason they come to us.
Same as, against capitalistic economy, we support you!

Left: We are humanistic….close to nature…evaluate truly the instinct.
No chance to be suppressed…open to all….end to end…love to love..
Call to call….flow to flow… baby to baby…

Right: Stop your limitless timeless flow….this is not the way to glow..
You humanistic huh! ...beat wisdom by the satanic stick! You worship
Satan! we worship God the almighty!

Left: Where’s God? Ever you seen? We can not drink delusion!

Right: You speak untrue! Show me the proof that ‘there is no God’?
We see indirect proofs ….attributes…his system-rules-laws all over.
You blind….your inner eyesight off or willingly stay inside No!

Left: You’re blind we see….In the name of God
You play kill game. Religion is the cause of hatred, atrocity!


Right: Misconstrued.. misconceived..misinterpretation!
Some hypocrite has given chance you to say so!
Incapable you can’t encompass whole.
Hatred, atrocity not just because of religion!
Finance, power the trigger.

Left: why your God can not save atrocities?

Right: Because things are relative, laws active. Direct action
By God if taken, then how can be judged human wisdom!
And at times God control over….you blind just do not see!

Left: Lefts are made………bereft……….left! No, not sure! May be!

Right: You auxiliary. we respect your conscience! Not identical all of left.
Powerful polemic Some are, we know.
Bye for now.

-september-2009,
copyright reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 30 September 2009

very interesting write.....well done starx100000

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Sanjib Das 01 October 2009

LIKE DAY AND NIGHT, TRUE AND FALSE, YOU PRESENT A CONTRAST IN A VERY AMAZING MANNER. I GIVE YOU, IF POSSIBLE,100/10

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Ency Bearis 01 October 2009

another unique creativity and nice write philosophical contrast between left and right...good job Sarwar.....10

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Noel Horlanda 01 October 2009

Quite interesting this piece is, philosophical arguments that no one will benefit, no lossers, no winners everything will be fine. Though the arguments, the dialogues are believable and also intellectual. Excellent write!

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 October 2009

The right hemispher and the left in fight and argument, refernce to history and the big divide in the head, body, very technical write to get to the theme with strong words. Your unique style.10

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Antonio Liao 11 October 2009

'a mode that talks'....the willingness to stand amidst the chaotic world gives.... a fighter of his own realm.....my hope and respect cloth you with wisdom .....to see life reflectively and lead your dream to a crucially face the point of departure .....an honest fight ends with strong determination..... go my friend ...i will be your shadow of loosing the grief of the world....stand for you ...God bless a 10+++++

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Indira Babbellapati 09 October 2009

mind boggling intellectualism...

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2009

A wonderful poem Sarwar, well thought out whichever side of the brain you used, 10 Lynda xx

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2009

Another significant write...a piece to ponder.. a mind-working piece..GREAT many topics can be brought up with this... the left and right in the society..our ideology. our mentality....our perception towards things how our mind works...physically, psychologically, emotionally, spiritually, mentally and socially...in all aspects... the connection of being a right or left handed..i find this amusing for i am a left handed person...how it differs from the other the right and the left hemisphere of our brain.... how it affects my attitude...my mind..my being me... I love this...a write with great things to share... Thanks for sharing, my friend 10++++++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Anand Madhukar 04 October 2009

I fully agree with Mamtaji. You have adroitly brought together disparate schools of thought and diverse emotions in this uniquely innovative piece.

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Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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