Cold Sky Poem by sal carter

Cold Sky



Cold sky,
Scudded clouds
Constant grind
Of broken crowds

Frozen time
Stopped mid flight
Changed world
Changed sight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Naylor 04 February 2006

The imagery is vivid and imaginative. I felt like I was floating above, looking down at a scene - somehow the words, 'the lonely crowd' come to my mind.' Nice alliteration in the first stanza.

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sal carter

sal carter

reigate, surrey, england
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