Cold Room 6 Poem by Ros Venn

Cold Room 6

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Room 6 is always cold,
Sun radiators and energy efficient lights have no effect,
Exams, English and French all in Room 6,
Two levels Higher and ordinary,

I have gained a chill and a coldfull headache, From Room 6,
I now wear a light navy jacket with pale pink/white hands,
My last few days here and I do not pity those who will be hereafter,
Almost an Adult but by some treated like a child,

5 days of the week and too many classes in Room 6,
Voices, humour, snobbery and friendship,
Room 6 I always feel hungry,
I'm like a furnace which fuel is burnt,

Room 6 I will not miss you,
I'll be in a warm gym room,
I will be a college student,
Dreams, hopes and fears for the future.

Tuesday, July 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mai Murphy Venn 16 October 2015

You should have had a hot bottle connie

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Pollie Frampton 29 September 2015

Sounds like you have had enough of Room No.6 Ros. Sounds like it's a place that holds one back and limits creativity, individuality and all things warm and inviting which is what life should be about. Your last stanza is uplifting and welcoming to a better future, albeit one that it is unknown. In life, we all worry about the future but we also hope and aspire. At the end of the day, we mould who we are through our experiences and our openness to change, difference and achievement. Best of luck, Ros. Well done!

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Mai Murphy Venn 11 February 2015

not to bad what happen in room 5

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