Cold Diamond Edge Poem by ONElia AVElar

Cold Diamond Edge

Rating: 2.9


Of your persistent silence
cold diamond edge
threatens to turn soon
into gravel Stonehenge.

To break my heart.
To cut my tongue.

Or just to split
the wooden bench,
where once in mid of it
we loved to sit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Cool and touchy composition 10

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A very fine set for a plot: Split at Stonehenge, an interesting tale by our beloved Onelia, a true lady.

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David Desantis 24 February 2009

this is your best poem that i have read so far... it's so simple yet at the same time very complex. The emotion really comes through. Also, the coldness and loneliness is very prevelant. Excellent job as always Onelia.

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Emancipation Planz 19 February 2009

My baby of rough is back! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Yay... tis a cutting bite of the rich of much... sparkle to big bangs edge... aroha xx

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Herbert Nehrlich1 19 February 2009

I marvel at your ability to put so much into a short poem like this. Excellent. H

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