Coincidence Or Fate? Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Coincidence Or Fate?

Rating: 4.1


Between random things and situations:
Distinctive messages in dots-connection.
Beyond the rational mind, to heart they speak,
And she reveals the truth in burning cheeks.

Through a frequency unconsciously they share
The same mind and heart—a feeling bear;
Beyond time and distance from the past:
Still synchronizing, yet that love is dust.

Are these connections coincidences or fate?
Albeit the time for love and hope is late:
Could it be possible buried hearts to live?
Unaware of love they guard, —concealed?

Between random things and situations,
I see miracles and images in dots-connection:
Shall I conclude: —Coincidence or Fate?
When my heart deeply whispers: —it is fate.

Tuesday, September 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 10 September 2014

This is an extremely persuasive poem. With the whispered conclusion: fate, I was in total agreement. But not because you simplified the conundrum, if anything you kept it open throughout the poem. It was rather that each stanza told some convincing heart-truth that cumulatively made me follow the progression and agree with your conclusion. In the 1st stanza it's the speaker's burning cheek; in the 2nd it's the minds and hearts in sync; and in the last stanza it's the word miracles strategically placed to cinch your argument.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 January 2015

Hello Mihaela. An interesting poem which deals with questions, thoughts and pondering that we all experience. I for one believe that there is a purpose for everything. (Ecclesiastes 3: 1) I enjoyed, Loyd

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Valsa George 16 September 2014

What might appear as coincidence also is fate! Though it might seem foolish to ascribe everything as fate, we somehow are persuaded to believe that everything has a mysterious connection and interference! We are rather forced to think that events unfold as preordained, though I would like to think otherwise! Enjoyed the poem with the beautiful concluding stanza!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 September 2014

Between random things and situations I see miracles and images in dot connection; Shall I conclude: - Coincidence or Fate? When my heart deeply whispers: - It is fate. Heart always whispers the truth, Coincidence and fate are two sides of a coin, sometimes coincidence is it and sometimes the fate.

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Kanav Justa 13 September 2014

A lovely ending to this poem...

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 11 September 2014

So beautiful....play of words expression of emotions. And I love the tone. Thanks for creating something to beautiful

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