Coexistence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Coexistence



"Coexistence"
I have come across more than once
It has wider meaning
In life and defining

Animals too live peacefully
When given enough grass daily
It is their only need
With opens eyes to feed

So we are practical
Try to make life beautiful
Make no disturbance at home
Keep harmonious relation and welcome

Why I think of universe?
When at home it burns
With scuffle and daily altercation
I wish I must exist for good relation

Life must be made smooth
With enough of space to both
Take care of family and think ahead
The concern for kids is well read

Friday, October 31, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

“Coexistence” I have come across more than once

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Its a little vague Corey Phillips1 hour ago To many comparisons for me and left me hanging on the ending.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

welcome Descah Nekesa Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Henry Okehie likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1 today b

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Wallace LaBenne1 hour ago Well presented. .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

How true! Jamie Cantore1 hour ago Family relationships are oftentimes the hardest to deal with, but are ultimately the most important. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

I like the topic Kelvin Tong1 hour ago Well, are animals really living in a peaceful environment now? Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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