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Cocktail of kalaeidoscope

(ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women

Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks
Bookish book-worms buried in books

A palomino and a pony patter on the paving
Hucksters and hawkers hawking every housing.

Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.

Doves cooing a divine chorus
Frogs frisking out of focus
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.

Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.

Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.

All this when I ventured about videotaping
Nature's much nicer even with no landscaping

These are direly different scenes from different parts of the globe
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe

Submitted: Friday, October 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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  • Yasmeen Khan (12/19/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    A unique poem, lively and sprightly :)

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  • Mehri Mehraban (11/2/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    A great oral picture of Nature, life and glob. I admire your delicate style in poetry.

  • Kevin Patrick (11/1/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    A dazzling concoction with beautifully times words composed with delicacy of a songbirds voice. You give nature her voice. Fantastic

  • marvin brato (11/1/2013 3:30:00 AM)

    Excellent narration of life's scenes, exploring the essence of existence!

  • Wahab Abdul (10/29/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    wow! this is really wonderful, magic of alliteration, you executed excellently! 10

  • John Shea (10/27/2013 8:40:00 PM)

    Safari...poaching my mind with your prose so divine...pup...read If...If you will.

  • Dave Walker (10/27/2013 12:10:00 PM)

    A real mixed bag of pictures, a great poem.

  • David Mclansky (10/27/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    A fine poem going around the world

  • Ruth Walters (10/26/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    I can imagine you reading this. I think you would jazz it up :) I liked.....Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz brilliant use of words to make your poem sing :)

  • Matt Mooney (10/26/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    Rich in its language and imagery. I enjoyed reading it.10.

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