S.zaynub Kamoonpuri


Cocktail Of Kalaeidoscope - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

(ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women

Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks
Bookish book-worms buried in books

A palomino and a pony patter on the paving
Hucksters and hawkers hawking every housing.

Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.

Doves cooing a divine chorus
Frogs frisking out of focus
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.

Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.

Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.

All this when I ventured about videotaping
Nature's much nicer even with no landscaping

These are direly different scenes from different parts of the globe
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe


Comments about Cocktail Of Kalaeidoscope by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Freshman - 953 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/19/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    A unique poem, lively and sprightly :) (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 513 Points Mehri Mehraban (11/2/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    A great oral picture of Nature, life and glob. I admire your delicate style in poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Kevin Patrick (11/1/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    A dazzling concoction with beautifully times words composed with delicacy of a songbirds voice. You give nature her voice. Fantastic (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 3:30:00 AM)

    Excellent narration of life's scenes, exploring the essence of existence! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (10/29/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    wow! this is really wonderful, magic of alliteration, you executed excellently! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 228 Points John Shea (10/27/2013 8:40:00 PM)

    Safari...poaching my mind with your prose so divine...pup...read If...If you will. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (10/27/2013 12:10:00 PM)

    A real mixed bag of pictures, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,044 Points David Mclansky (10/27/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    A fine poem going around the world (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 750 Points Ruth Walters (10/26/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    I can imagine you reading this. I think you would jazz it up :) I liked.....Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz brilliant use of words to make your poem sing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Matt Mooney (10/26/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    Rich in its language and imagery. I enjoyed reading it.10. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,965 Points Noreen Carden (10/26/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Hello S.zaynub this is a wonderful poem full of life and colour well done enjoyed reading (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,213 Points Lyn Paul (10/26/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    What a great cocktail you have mixed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohammed Jafer (10/25/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    fantastic. I like reading your poems. Very good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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