Cloudy Thoughts Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Cloudy Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


At times I feel
Thoughts are clouds
That gather instantly
In the sky of life.

Vision is obscured
Clarity gets blurred
Thunderous feelings roar
Memories keep flashing.

Clouds of thoughts
Move away leaving
Emptiness so bright
Mind's eye blinks.

Hope the final state
Reached will lead
To some fresh ideas
To steer life ahead.

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Wonderful feeling you have shared here. Like clouds, thoughts become too cloudy to make rain of emotion in wonderful poems. Clarity of memories keep on flashing reaching life ahead. A fantastic poem shared here. Very wise and nice sharing...10

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2015

Wonderful metaphor. Enjoyed the poem and last lines of optimism very much.

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Ramesh Rai 22 November 2015

comparison of thoughts with that of cloud is more appropriate. Both have the same functions. +++++10

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Sanjukta Nag 08 November 2015

This is a brilliant metaphor and you expressed it so well through your poems. Amazing.

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Valsa George 07 November 2015

A Very striking presentation of a mental state when thoughts cloud around and vision is obscured! Great write!

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Musawir Raakh 07 November 2015

Indeed, that's a true picture of what it is, we do hope that we may get the clear picture so that we may write the best stuff, good 1 dear, I invite you to read and rate mine.

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