Clouds Poem by Bob Blackwell

Clouds

Rating: 5.0


At home the clouds have no
bottoms cut off by magic knife,
they are soft, fluffy, white and
like me have shades of grey.

Happy clouds, quiet clouds,
relaxed, not moving clouds.
Bathed in sunshine, they are
clouds I want to see.

Glad to be here clouds.
Altogether nice clouds
No place like home clouds.
Clouds I want to stay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 24 February 2007

Bob, lovely fluffy white clouds. Beautifully written and lovely flow. I did like this one. Nice and easy. Another great write. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Raj Nandy 07 September 2009

BOB, Beautiful thoughts! Clouds are ghost-like insubstantial beings! More transient than human beings! Changes its shapes and forms - towing a child's dream! But when suddenly they decide to join hands and unite, they drench us with showers, - the very elixir of life! 10! -Raj

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 26 May 2009

A write as lovely as the Fluffy white clouds themselves. Today hovering over the ocean like soliers in rows, gray centres with white linings...serene....awesome

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Saeid Hadavand 26 April 2009

Happy clouds, quiet clouds, relaxed, not moving clouds. Well done.

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Sandra Fowler 04 January 2009

I love the pictures that the clouds create even on a gray and lowering day. Praise for your eloquent pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2007

Splendid flow Bob, I could imagine the clouds.....

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