Clouds Poem by Chris G. Vaillancourt

Clouds

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There are always shadows in the clouds
Startled pictures of places never shown.
Arches that sputter bravely
.................against the yellow of the sun.
There are always people in the clouds.
Strange visions of things to do tomorrow.
...........................Today is not a memory
............................for today is ignored
.........................in place of apparitions.

A man talks to the sky from the
.......................security of his deception.
Oddly, he touches himself
..........................in a pantomime
.................................of masturbation.

His vivid intellect shows
..........................the fogginess
..............................he believes in.

And he whispers,

so afraid someone might hear him.

There are always dreamers in the clouds.
Eyes wide open, mind fast asleep.
Grinding chains of self oppression
.....................that assert themselves like
..........................icicles from a forgotten
..................................abandoned building.
There are always clouds in the clouds.
....................Levels of fog that have drifted
................... like soot from a coal-mine.

And he whispers,

so afraid someone might hear him.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 09 May 2014

Very frank in portrait and directly speaking to us Chris..

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Ramesh Rai 07 May 2014

Clouds and moon have always been inspirations for the poet. But here clouds within clouds makes a broad and deep meaning. In short i can say only a great poem.

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Tanya Gupta 18 April 2014

its wonderfull, enjoyed a lot reading it. thanks

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

Clouds...i like this work deeply. because it reminds me my poem called look at the eyes of clouds..(but my theme is different :) i believe that there are meanings and dreams laying in clouds. we have to catch them up. nice one.

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