Cloud Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Cloud

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If in
another space
our two minds
could interlace
like loving
legs on
sprawling beds
of sparkling lights
and moonbeam flights,
we could float
till dawn
on clouds
new born
just touched
with sun
like earth begun,
you and I
in another sky.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 May 2011

i like your poem very much it made me smile, hmmm, giggle actually how did you do it? nice poem it is?

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Sally P. P. 30 July 2019

Thanks for your comment, , appreciated. Sally

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The 4am Poet Worm 27 June 2010

spell binding i feel like this everytime i hold my Love against me.....

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Sally P. P. 29 July 2019

Lovely. Enjoy!

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Raj Arumugam 25 May 2010

gentle and inspired lines...

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Sally P. P. 20 February 2020

Thankyou for your sweet comment, , Raj.

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Siddharth Singh 15 March 2010

Obscure yet beautiful.

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Sally P. 11 June 2020

Thanks, Sid, your comment is appreciated always.

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Orville Phillips 12 March 2010

This poem wanders nicely, like cloud...

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Sally P.P. 11 June 2020

Thankyou, Orville, for your sweet remark.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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