Closer Poem by Rohit Sharma
Closer
Let's come closer one more time
Closer enough to make this fine,
Making this night worth remember
Sharing love with total surrender....
Come closer to me and make this true
Closer enough to love me all night through.
Hugging each other with our love so bright
Making this our very special night....
Come closer to me in my arms
Closer enough to feel the warmth,
Soft and gentle kisses all around
Loving each other without any bound....
Come closer to see how much I mean
Closer enough like you never have been,
To feel how much I feel for you
To love me the way I love you....
Let me come closer one more time
Closer enough to make you mine,
Making this moment worth remember
Sharing love with warmth and tender! ! !
This poem write felt so warm, encompassing and altogether right! Loved it! ; D
Rohit, I am spellbound by the simple langauage. Any one with little knowledge of English will understand your creativity and the emotions behind it. I am reading all your poems one by one you deserve 10+
‘Making this night worth remember Sharing love with total surrender.’ ~ Wow…the take off is jocund …I hope poet like you will keep up Closer always never make it ‘Closure’…. Enjoyed the vibe in full length… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Let's come closer one more time Closer enough to make this fine, Making this night worth remember Sharing love with total surrender...... closeness removes many misgivings....10
what a start and proper flow........ i got in love with this poem of yours......... Really touched my deep core.............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:15:30 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like the repetitive effect created by the similarities and subtle differences of the first and last stanzas. Good job!