I thought that my voyage had come to its end at the last limit of my power,---that the path before me was closed, that provisions were exhausted
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Very nice poem. However, just two suggestions. Line 2 is rather long. You could move the sentence - that the path before me was closed to another line. Also, instead of a new country on the last line, I would have preferred a new track is revealed. But it's up to you. I enjoyed reading it. Beautiful!
I thought that my voyage had come
to its end
at the last limit of my power, - -that
the path before me was closed,
that provisions were exhausted
and the time come to take shelter in
a silent obscurity.
I will complete thy job.
you are only my inspiration for rest of my life
giving me new melody of your song
to sing and appease the world
with thy fragrance,
where new world is revealed with its wonder.
The spark of divine bliss does not let man collapse in the throes of disappointment. The poem is a reiteration of this fact. Man lives through chances and possibilities that know no end. The end of one opportunity gives birth to another opportunity. Hence no scope of dejection.