Closed Eyes Poem by Amgad Samy

Closed Eyes

Rating: 4.5


Noise couldn't be a solution
to awake his closed eyes
he slipped into deep coma
there was no shame in hiding
in an area between life and death
where no feeling was expressed
Being unable to give any impression
no attention was paid to her cries
just creating an unbearable drama
to surpass the life he was leading
losing his desire to take a last breath
led her tears to be totally repressed

Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: deaths
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Skati 24 November 2014

I felt this poem greatly. Thanks.

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