Close To The Stars.. Poem by Abhijit Surve

Close To The Stars..

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Whenever you're close to me,
I know, you go warm inside..
So just let yourself free,
There is no reason to hide..

Butterflies within unfurl,
Still you try not to show..
Butterflies in me too curl,
Is what I want you to know..

When close to me you stand,
Why do you do what you do..
I simply don't understand,
The space between me and you..

What is there that stops,
Your loving heart to think..
As the gap between us crops,
Your cheeks go really pink..

Why is it whenever you talk,
About your worries and fears..
All these thoughts that stalk,
Soak your eyes with tears..

With me can't you be strong,
And rise up to a new dawn..
Why carry things for so long,
Just chuck them and move on..

Sometimes you randomly feel,
Things that you could've had..
Life around comes to a still,
Does all this make you sad..

Talk to your heart for a while,
And then you shall realize..
The worth of one good smile,
Happiness comes at no price..

I'm here to give you delight,
And treat you like a queen..
Make your world a beautiful site,
Where you have never been..

So now it's time to decide,
What you want from my love..
Keep all your worries aside,
Fly close to the stars above..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 04 September 2009

Fanastic job 10+++++ kept it up thoughtful and sweet poems and wondering too much

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Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

She is being coy. Nice wordings.

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Lady Grace 04 September 2009

thanks for this verses dear.. so nice to be closed to you as the stars closed to the moon to smell the scent from your sweat as roses attracts butterflies....

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Surya . 04 September 2009

a wonderful poem.nice words.this para is very good 'So now it's time to decide, What you want from my love.. Keep all your worries aside, Fly close to the stars above' voted10 surya

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