Close Friend Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Close Friend

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Close friend

I proposed her to be close friend
I was sure she will shoot up and end
With hostile reaction and flare up
"Nonsense proposal to be torn off"

I was taken a back and stared
I had taken a chance and dared
She was no where seen in mood
I completely lost her and not understood

But no, she sprang a surprise
She gained composure and took to praise
I expected long run and chase
But saw much of relief on her face

She didn't believe in for what I had asked
What was right for her and at stake?
I explained honestly about feelings
She listened to but still remained unwilling

In fact she had lot more in mind
What was going on and how to find?
I was presenting lovely picture
She shook her head as was unsure

I was moving close to her
That she took lightly and did not bother
I gathered strength to hold her hand
And proposed to be close and real friend

I was not sure about what was going on in her mind
It was great task to lure her and to find
But I was sure of her falling in my sincerity
She was nice with sober and good woman like quality

I just drew her near and whispered in ear
How much time you need to decide in year?
Come closer and just be the one like others?
I am prepared to stay with you and share

She put her eyes down and submitted
I moved hand around and admitted
Her company as great achievement
The glorious and memorable happy moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sankaran Ayya 12 February 2012

Good chase which yielded good result. Are you talking about some sort of companionship? -KAVIN CHARALAN

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 February 2012

Johnny Imnobody Windman very nice 4 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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