Close Enough To See Poem by neo riddick

Close Enough To See

Rating: 5.0


Other side of the world
thats just where you may be
the connection we had was so hard to believe
in your arm's is where all my pain was released
now all there is are nasty dagger's full of hate
what we had was wonderful. guess misery is just my own fate
these mixed emotion's just don't seem to stop
i hold my head in my hands..feels like it's about to pop
you hate me, i love you. i hate you, you love me
no matter what may be said, in my heart it's in your arms that where i wanna be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Madison 17 February 2009

just reading this poem actually brought me to tears. wow

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Alyson Leoffler 29 January 2009

This is absolutely a brilliant poem. Keep writing

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