Cliché Love Poem by Ananda Alves
Cliché Love
Your absence consumes me so hard
Just hard as your unbearable presence
Your eyes give me confort when they follow me
But they follow me so constantly your stares look haunted
Your hands provide me great pleasure
Yet it's so deep that makes me want to crush you
Your body is my safest place to hide
However it hides me so much I can easily get lost
Your love drives me crazy
So crazy it makes me hate you
You know me so well that you own me
But here's my payback: I know you in the same way
And guess what? It makes us even
(even more in love)
This is a wonderful poem Ananda. Certainly a pleasure to read it. I love how you present the conflict of love and hate... How one thing can be good and at the same time... consuming or over whelming. Keep up the good work. This poem is terrific. -Aroob
Conflicting emotions here Ananda... Love to hate and back to love again, yes some relationships are like that..well written poem...10
Ananda, it is very deep and powerful, surprising and insightful too. A special poem.. reflecting special feelings! Frank
Put together VERY well, and beautifully said. You have some killer lines here. S x
Another very nicely written piece which I enjoyed reading. I'm sure I shall return to read it again. Thank you Annie.
'Your absence consumes me so hard Just hard as your unbearable presence' beautifully expressed...love IS like that... cheers! !
Ananda, Just read this poem...BEAUTIFUL! You have a real talent. I gave you a 10. Your friend, Cecelia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Ananda, this is a lovely love poem. It is filled with sweet enchanting words. A worthy 10 in my mind. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David