Classmate Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Classmate

Rating: 5.0


In the wispy glow of dusk
he came

mazing through years of husk
memory groped his name.

Then I remembered.

Though drew us apart fate
once we were very close

inseparable classmate!

Seemed so empty
even an hour without him
more together more the happy
we bonded too in dream.

Shared we two
same liking and taste
loved to do
living without the rest.

I have come to close a deal
in his eyes was sadness spread
hope you remember still
the promise we made.

I remembered.

when we last met
he said

let's seal this with trust
must come to meet his heart's pal
the one departing first.

Friday, October 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 November 2014

Very touching indeed.....after years coming close to close a deal with sunshine glowing in eyes.......amazing piece.........pradipji......10/10

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Valsa George 01 November 2014

A poem quite touching! How he has kept his word made years back! The poem with its mysterious air is very engaging! A great write! A 10

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Saheb Mohapatra 01 November 2014

Yes classmates are such members in our life to whom our soul never shall forget...........they too are very possessive about us..............we have very strong relation in a class which no one shall gauge........all that memories shall have meetings with us till end...........great poem........I salute this extraordinary of yours to ph.........greatly enjoyed it.....thanks for sharing this tremendous poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Seemed so empty even an hour without him more together more the happy we bonded too in dream... nice lines...10 classmate lovely man to relate in life as friend and remember ill end

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