Civilized Poem by lady grace

Civilized

Rating: 5.0


if you go behind the clouds
and you’ll see the fireflies’ lamp
you will see the bottle of tears
lock inside the terrors hearts.

use not the power of bullets
but the power of mind
use not the influence
but the honest lies

cross the bridges without fears
dropp your body on the brook
hide yourself in the desert
peace the objective and the purpose.

it’s maybe a long road
to return for peace of confusion
but the soul, heart and the shoulder
are you, no other but you.

you should learn like a river
and shine like a sun
you should fly like an eagle
wake the resting mind

as you soar to the sky
where nations laid unaware
pour your unending blessings
to pedestrians, human, and mankind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 03 September 2009

Beautifully constructed and a strong message to think on......10 + + + Fay

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~ Jon London ~ 03 September 2009

Beautiful and rich with thought...lovely composition....You have made me proud my fine lady....stunning work 10+++++++++++++++ all the way

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Ency Bearis 03 September 2009

brilliant verses an inspirational point of view...great poem.....10

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Ken E Hall 03 September 2009

Etremely fine poem on mankinds woes maybe we should follow your star-thanks++++++++10 Beaut poem regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

use not the power of bullets but the power of mind use not the influence but the honest lies....we should be civilized enough to tell hones lies if that situation arises but lies are after all lies.... i appricaite the rare quality in potess. she has winderful abiility to influence the reader's mind....10 read mine.. no to violence....step mother and forgiveness

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

‘peace the objective and the purpose.’…world needs much…Nature teaches in myriad ways but we’re blindfolded…self created…when will come GOK …POK? Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for peace] - GOK = God only know POK = Poet only knows n

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Patti Masterman 02 October 2009

This is excellent. It's wonderful to find a beautiful poem but also full of deep ideas.

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

An inspiring poem. Beautifully written. Enjoyed Thanks

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Rafique Farooqi 12 September 2009

You fluent like a river, very true werite Grace you are wonderful in description.......10++++++++

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Raj Arumugam 11 September 2009

brilliant....insightful...powerful...

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